Hi Josie
Thanks for sending me your moon poem.
I really enjoyed reading it.
I loved the idea of the ocean! So imaginative. Your poem made a warm glow inside me. I love friendship poems.
I am posting some favourites later today on Poetry Box. I have picked yours.
Watch out for my new challenge in September 1st.
The moon challenge was so popular – it was hard picking just a few – so remember as a poet
I always know it is the writing that counts because there are always times when you don’t get picked for things (it happened to me last week!).
Ngā mihi
Paula
Josie's winning entry:
Fox and moonI am a foxOn a cliffWith my friend moon.He is so gentle.He has an oceanMade from soft wolf fur.He has another friendCalled Ruru.And more friends called Stars.By Josie OsborneAge 6Ilam School
Congratulations Josie. We are so proud of you!!!
Hi Josie. Your moon poem is just beautiful. You paint a lovely picture with your words.
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